A Game of Thrones
Apr. 11th, 2011 12:41 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
I think the Beats Antique concert was what I needed to get me out of the rut I've been in the last week or so in regard to bass playing. Although everything I come up with sounds distinctly Middle Eastern now.
I wish I could as easily get out of the rut I've fallen into writing Seasons in the Abyss. The same thing has happened on the last two attempts. I'll get about a hundred pages in and then I just get stuck. I'm not stopping and letting it fall by the wayside this time, I can't afford to. But man do I feel stuck. And I feel like the story isn't that interesting. Maybe it's time to type up what I have and open up some beta readership to see if it really is as boring as I think it is or if Nitokris is a dumb a heroine as I think I've made her. I don't think I'm venturing into "dumb horror movie bimbo" territory with her yet, but I worry if her reactions to all the weird stuff that happens to her are plausible.
Meanwhile, after having it sit on my bookshelf for two years I am finally reading George R.R. Martin's A Game of Thrones. I can see what all the fuss is about because it's pretty good. Even though not much has happened yet, I'm hooked on the gloomy medieval characters and weirdly plausible fantasy world. His writing really pulls you in and reading it makes me want to listen to power metal where there is much singing about swords, and battles, and feasting, and fighting to the bitter end, and mourning the king who hath fallen, etc. I'm trying not to get too emotionally attached to any characters because I have heard that every character you could get emotionally attached too, dies. We'll see. Looking forward to my break at work so I can keep reading.
I wish I could as easily get out of the rut I've fallen into writing Seasons in the Abyss. The same thing has happened on the last two attempts. I'll get about a hundred pages in and then I just get stuck. I'm not stopping and letting it fall by the wayside this time, I can't afford to. But man do I feel stuck. And I feel like the story isn't that interesting. Maybe it's time to type up what I have and open up some beta readership to see if it really is as boring as I think it is or if Nitokris is a dumb a heroine as I think I've made her. I don't think I'm venturing into "dumb horror movie bimbo" territory with her yet, but I worry if her reactions to all the weird stuff that happens to her are plausible.
Meanwhile, after having it sit on my bookshelf for two years I am finally reading George R.R. Martin's A Game of Thrones. I can see what all the fuss is about because it's pretty good. Even though not much has happened yet, I'm hooked on the gloomy medieval characters and weirdly plausible fantasy world. His writing really pulls you in and reading it makes me want to listen to power metal where there is much singing about swords, and battles, and feasting, and fighting to the bitter end, and mourning the king who hath fallen, etc. I'm trying not to get too emotionally attached to any characters because I have heard that every character you could get emotionally attached too, dies. We'll see. Looking forward to my break at work so I can keep reading.
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Date: 2011-04-11 08:06 pm (UTC)Beta readers may be just what you need. I know it's helped me a lot. Even if I end up completely disregarding their comments, it really helps in stepping back to view your story from different angles. I'd be happy to give it a read if you end up doing so - keep me in mind! :)
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Date: 2011-04-12 04:51 am (UTC)I reread the part I thought wasn't working tonight and it flows better than I thought. Beta still wouldn't hurt though. If I can get it typed up I'll count you in.
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Date: 2011-04-12 02:09 pm (UTC)Based on who told me to read Game of Thrones I figured I would find it horribly boring. I can't explain this person in any other way but robot. lol. Also uh...Sean Bean in the tv series. I'm not waiting to read the book. Not with all the other bajillion books I still have to read! lol.
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Date: 2011-04-12 09:06 pm (UTC)I think I am being too critical. I re-read the parts that troubled me last night and it turned out I really liked them. Taking some time away from them and reading them again later really helped, I think. I'll include you in the beta if I can get it going.
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Date: 2011-04-13 11:45 am (UTC)Yeah I do that a lot. I go on about how I hate something I wrote and then look at it in a few days or a week later or whatever and It's just like that's actually awesome.
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Date: 2011-04-12 09:30 pm (UTC)Oh, and I LURV Sean Bean...