It screws with my sense of pace way too much. I'll finish a scene or a chapter feeling like I wrote something nice and meaty, only to find that my friendly exchange between two characters reads like it's fucking Kill Bill or something.
The structure of House of Leaves defines pretty much exactly how the writing feels in my head, from the passages bouncing from page to page to the sentences that demand the space of an entire page.
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Date: 2011-06-02 04:43 pm (UTC)It screws with my sense of pace way too much. I'll finish a scene or a chapter feeling like I wrote something nice and meaty, only to find that my friendly exchange between two characters reads like it's fucking Kill Bill or something.
The structure of House of Leaves defines pretty much exactly how the writing feels in my head, from the passages bouncing from page to page to the sentences that demand the space of an entire page.